Okay - well, there's not a huge amount going on here - some nice 'crystal' thumbnails excepted, which show promise. I know you've been struggling with migraine over the past few days - hope you're feeling better - but being completely straight with you, there's just not enough work on here, which makes this halfway stage feedback not hugely beneficial for both of us. I think you need a bit of a reality-check, Gemma - in terms of my expectations - i.e. they're pretty high, and I'm assuming you think that's a good thing. I don't expect perfection or instant wonderfulness, but I do expect a bit of graft, a bit of enthusiasm, and a bit of attack in terms of meeting a brief. If there are issues stopping you from engaging more productively, do please email me. If not, consider yourself prodded. You've got 2 weeks before your first undergraduate crit. It's time to 'do the work'.
OGR 11/10/2013
ReplyDeleteHi Gemma,
Okay - well, there's not a huge amount going on here - some nice 'crystal' thumbnails excepted, which show promise. I know you've been struggling with migraine over the past few days - hope you're feeling better - but being completely straight with you, there's just not enough work on here, which makes this halfway stage feedback not hugely beneficial for both of us. I think you need a bit of a reality-check, Gemma - in terms of my expectations - i.e. they're pretty high, and I'm assuming you think that's a good thing. I don't expect perfection or instant wonderfulness, but I do expect a bit of graft, a bit of enthusiasm, and a bit of attack in terms of meeting a brief. If there are issues stopping you from engaging more productively, do please email me. If not, consider yourself prodded. You've got 2 weeks before your first undergraduate crit. It's time to 'do the work'.